Many people lost their lives on this tragic day.

This handout provides steps and exercises to eliminate wordiness at the sentence level.

Below are some examples of how to write a good thesis statement.

Thesis Statement Builder also provides a tool to generate a basic outline for your persuasive essay. By following the tips and tricks from application, you will be well on your way to a rough draft of your persuasive essay.

Makes a promise to the reader about the scope, purpose, and direction of your paper.

Solar energy is less harmful to the environment than fossil fuels.

first of all i must say that i leave many comments on your page but didnt get any response.
i have major issue in writing, i always have many ideas about topic and i always mix them in passage writing.. in july i got 6 bands over all now m again going to sit in exam on 19 sep.
kindly suggest me to improve my eng language skills.

I’m always confused if we should write only one main idea for each paragraph or more. If yes, how? I’m asking this question because there are two causes in the second paragraph and two solutions in the third one. In fact, the second paragraph contains two main ideas which are the two causes and also, the second paragraph contains two main ideas which are two solutions.
Would you please clarify if it’s okay to include more than one main point in paragraph by using linking words, such as firstly and secondly?

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This is a formal essay, you don’t write about people you know. You write about people in general. Also take a look at your examples – which one offers the best range of grammar and vocabulary? Use your common sense.
All the best

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Now, my question is, do I need to mention some personal examples like, my cousin eats McD burger a lot and he has gained lot of weight and all OR is it alright to write examples in a general way like… computer engineers these days sit in front of monitors for long hours without doing any physical activities which causes increase in weight.

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In some countries, people’s weight has significantly increased while their levels of health have decreased. What do you think may be the causes of this problem and what solutions can you suggest for solving them? Give reasons and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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If this is true then how students should mature themselves in all kinds of essay topics and their in-depth questions without having any research? I am also asking as I face problems while writing within the time limit good maturity of ideas on that particular topic of the essay.

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I am going to write the exam on the 29th of august,I always loose my writing…but fortunately, I could go through your site and pick some tips…your sample essays,video lessons (discussion and opinion essays) particularly very helpful.I am bit nervous still….
I will let you know the result….
You are a wonderful teacher…God bless you!
Many Thanks

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Hi Liz,
I have taken IELTS exam number of times, and my only weakness is in writing. I have noticed that writing is a subjective test, and you need to have excellent grammar and maturity of ideas. Just like your essay above, you have displayed the good maturity of ideas.