Stage 6- Revising the Research Paper

What are the characteristics of rural adult learners in an adult educationprogram? (too narrow)

It is your entry into the academy.

28. Potentially the silliest part of the dissertation is the Suggestionsfor Further Research section. This section is usually written atthe very end of your writing project and little energy is left to makeit very meaningful. The biggest problem with this section is that the suggestionsare often ones that could have been made prior to you conducting your research.Read and reread this section until you are sure that you have made suggestionsthat emanate from your experiences in conducting the research and the findingsthat you have evolved. Make sure that your suggestions for further researchserve to link your project with other projects in the future and providea further opportunity for the reader to better understand what you havedone.

There is a section on chapter order and thesis structure at the end of this text.

If you have any characteristic grammatical failings, check for them.

I'll order a microfilm of that thesis they cited in their paper.") For important parts of apparatus, you should include workshop drawings, circuit diagrams and computer programs, usually as appendices.

(depending on the reliability of your computer and the age of your disk drive).

6. If you're going to ask for a leave of absence from your job whileyou're working on your research this isn't a good time to do it. Chancesare you can do the "thinking about it" stage without a leaveof absence. Assuming that there are six major phases that you will haveduring your research project, probably the best time to getthe most from a leave of absence is during the fourthstage* - the writing stage. This is the time when you really need tobe thinking well. To be able to work at your writing in large blocks oftime without interruptions is something really important. A leave of absencefrom your job can allow this to happen. A leave of absence from your jobprior to this stage may not be a very efficient use of the valuable timeaway from your work.

Touch them and feel their thickness from time to time – ah, the thesis is taking shape.

Obviously your examiners will read the thesis.

30. The most obvious suggestion is the one seldom followed. Try to attendone or more defenses prior to yours. Find out which other studentsare defending their research and sit in on their defense. In many departmentsthis is expected of all graduate students. If this is not the case foryou, check with your adviser to see that you can get an invitationto attend some defenses.

The short answer is: rather more than for a scientific paper.

31. Find opportunities to discuss your research with your friends andcolleagues. Listen carefully to their questions. See if you are able topresent your research in a clear and coherent manner. Are there aspectsof your research that are particularly confusing and need further explanation?Are there things that you forgot to say? Could you change the order ofthe information presented and have it become more understandable?

"I prepared the sample..." is clear.

27. If you are including a Conclusions/Implications section in yourdissertation make sure you really present conclusions and implications.Often the writer uses the conclusions/implications section to merely restatethe research findings. Don't waste my time. I've already read the findingsand now, at the Conclusion/Implication section, I want you to help me understandwhat it all means. This is a key section of the dissertation and is sometimesbest done after you've had a few days to step away from your research andallow yourself to put your research into perspective. If you do this youwill no doubt be able to draw a variety of insights that help link yourresearch to other areas. I usually think of conclusions/implications asthe "So what" statements. In other words, what are the key ideasthat we can draw from your study to apply to my areas of concern.

I can't seem to sit down and write my thesis anymore.

32. I hope you don't try circulating chapters of your dissertationto your committee members as you are writing them. I find this practiceto be most annoying and one that creates considerable problems for thestudent. You must work closely with your dissertation director. He/sheis the person you want to please. Develop a strategy with the dissertationdirector regarding how and when your writing should be shared. Only afteryour dissertation director approves of what you have done should you attemptto share it with the rest of the committee. And by then it's time for thedefense. If you prematurely share sections of your writing with committeemembers you will probably find yourself in a situation where one committeemember tells you to do one thing and another member says to do somethingelse. What should you do? The best answer is not to get yourself into sucha predicament. The committee meeting (the defense) allows the concernsof committee members to surface in a dialogical atmosphere where opposingviews can be discussed and resolved.